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Bike track explanation

 Bike tracks

Our school owns 14 acers that is heaps of land and we were thinking of something that our school and the community can use, we even wrote a letter to shane jones about it and how we need more money to build and make a bike track.

How we can get a bike track at school?

To get a bike track at our school and for the community we would heaps of money like about $30,000 or mabey even $40,000, we could probably sell heaps of things at market day thats how we mostly get heaps of money. One way we could get a bike track is to make a community and school bike track donating box and mabey some signs.

Where can a bike track go?

So our school has 14 acres and we have a massive hill that would be great for seniors but we what one for our school so we would have to make two bike tracks one big one and one a bit smaller like one around our bottom field and we will still be able to play on the bottom field.

Who would use the bike tracks?

So our school is really amazing to be thinking of a bike track so if we are getting a bike it would be great to let our community have some fun and ride around a little bit so our community  would be great to share a bike track with.

How would you use a bike track 

Using a bike track is really cool but you dont want to ruin it for other kids and push them off their bikes and make them do a trick then they fall off and brake their arm or leg because you would definitely get banned from going on it because hurting people doesn’t get you far, and another way to use a bike track is to listen to the teachers who are trying to tell you to get off because its class time listen to them and don’t just ride away that would be worst.

Why would you use it?

Riding on a bike track would release stress and angry thoughts, it would get you away from all the screens in school, it is also healthy for your body and helps you be more confidt at school at doing your speech in front of heaps of people.

Conclusion 

To sum this all up I think it is really good to have a bike track for our school and community because people love to get out side into the natural nature like and have fun and just relaxe while ride a bike with your friends having races and getting tied, you also get to bring your own bike, having run doing cool tricks and cool things like that.

By Hani

As I saw it - Tuia 250

 

I'm a paintbrush

i have metal around my hair my handle is wooden i got used for ages by tupaia i had to paint a famous picture of a moāri trading kŌura with joseph banks they took forever i got really tired,

 They got painted half way up my handle and they didn't wash or dry me an hour later. I was hard and stuff. I couldn’t breathe properly. I couldn't move either. I just wanted to sleep in someone's pocket.

By Hani Pene

Bulldog report

 Bulldogs

Bulldogs are hard to train, they also have really strong jaws, a bulldog that decides to bite or be aggressive is formidable.

Where bulldogs come from???

Most bulldogs come from the United Kingdom and england.

What bulldogs eat???

Royal canin adult dog food also for puppys,

Royal canin is a High quality protein dog  food 

Older bulldogs eat about 2 times a day puppies eat around 2/1 cups a day

Enemies and how they protect themselves???

They would probably use there strong teeth and powerful jaws 

Would bulldogs be good as pets???

I think they would be good pets if they were just little puppies. They're really cute. My dad used to breed them and we sold all of them except one.

I used to sit in its kennel at night.

Interesting facts about bulldogs

           Can bulldogs swim??? Most bulldogs can swim

But not as well, if you're going to let your bulldog in the pool. Maybe thinking of putting him/her in a life jacket swimming is much more difficult than other breeds.

England loves bulldogs because it one of thor national breeds in fact, world war 2 england was betrayed as a tough looking bulldog winston churchill was often called the ‘’british bulldog’’

Despite the nickname Churchill owed 2 poodles.

my padlet about pet power

my maths problem

      w.a.l.t create fractions word problems
Malikah had 2 boxes of pizzas, each pizza has 8 slices. 
Malikah ate 4/8 Jasmine ate 5/8
how many slices of pizzas are left?